Want Ad. Reflection
The Want Ad. is an assignment when you pretend to be Christopher Columbus and write a flyer to recruit his sailors for the first trip across the Atlantic Ocean. The Want Ad. #1is the first draft. I used a website called wordle to improve my word choice. I pasted the whole writing into the website then a picture appears. It shows that which word is used alot in bigger letter than other words. Then I tried to change the word for the writing base on wordle. After that, I post the second writing and make a second wordle to compare two writings. I think the 2nd one is better. But the word sailor I can’t change because I can’t find another word for it.
on October 16, 2008 at 6:31 pm
Very good post Duy, you have used very good word choice for this reflection, but still made some typos. Keep on the good work!!